Apart

i'm holding on but your letting go.
i just dont get it i really dont know.
but im still here waiting and i dont really know why.
but theres something that tells me theres still time.
just a little longer and we could have been 
but the pains worse than its ever been.
you said i love you and i said it back
but neither of us meant it like that.
and now were both left broken
shattered to pieces
words left unspoken
left in the creases
of my heart so torn apart
it was your idea that we needed time apart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 30, 2010 at 9:13 AM
You don't need someone like him. If he loves you he will come around. If not his lost. Keep it real . Nicely written.
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