Apart

throbbing head
raw heart
how it feels
when we're apart.

held back tears
drier eyes
lost remarks
deep inside

sick and weepy
no remark
I can't go back
I can't even start

how it feels
when we're apart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 8:42 AM
focus on when you'll be together & when you were together, write us a joyfull verse...rehearse! Light & Love
Christian Avatar
April 15, 2009 at 9:06 AM
aww so sweet, I know how you feel, me and my husband can not bear to be apart, it's like loosing a limb or something you feel so lost with out each other, other than the times we have no choice like work, we don't go anywhere with out each other
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