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Anytime I'M Sleeping

Anytime I’m sleeping and I’m dreaming I just wish I would not wake up To see myself suffering and screaming; I can’t make my bed my bride, I had to break up.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/21/2012 8:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~P.D.'s~ "The Dreams" contest Adeleke. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2012 4:44:00 PM
Adeleke, This is a very creative write. Well done. Congrats on making PD's winners' list....................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/20/2012 4:07:00 AM
Congratulations Adleleke a well deserved win xx
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Date: 2/19/2012 9:26:00 PM
congrats Adeleke on a great win for these dynamic dreamy words luv..
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Date: 2/19/2012 7:53:00 PM
ADELEKE.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your wonderful dreamy poem... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD
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Date: 6/16/2010 9:32:00 AM
enjoyed reading this one, Adeleke ;) I could very well relate--& when it's raining as it is right now--well good luck to me with "breaking up" haha--thanks for your comments, I'll definitely keep that drum beating ;) enjoy your day! --nikko :)
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Date: 6/15/2010 5:53:00 PM
Yes unfortunately I have to say goodbye to my bed every morning-But I get to return to it every night!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/15/2010 12:33:00 PM
Sad having to let go lol, what a funny way to say you need to be departed from your bed lol, who doesn't love their bed ... loved your write..P.D.
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