Anytime I'M Sleeping

Anytime I’m sleeping and I’m dreaming
I just wish I would not wake up
To see myself suffering and screaming;
I can’t make my bed my bride, I had to break up.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 8:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~P.D.'s~ "The Dreams" contest Adeleke. Love, Carol
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 4:44 PM
Adeleke, This is a very creative write. Well done. Congrats on making PD's winners' list....................S.Ronthorpe
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 4:07 AM
Congratulations Adleleke a well deserved win xx
Sweetheart Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 9:26 PM
congrats Adeleke on a great win for these dynamic dreamy words luv..
A   Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 7:53 PM
ADELEKE.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your wonderful dreamy poem... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD
K. Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 9:32 AM
enjoyed reading this one, Adeleke ;) I could very well relate--& when it's raining as it is right now--well good luck to me with "breaking up" haha--thanks for your comments, I'll definitely keep that drum beating ;) enjoy your day! --nikko :)
Conway Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 5:53 PM
Yes unfortunately I have to say goodbye to my bed every morning-But I get to return to it every night!~Tirzah~
A   Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 12:33 PM
Sad having to let go lol, what a funny way to say you need to be departed from your bed lol, who doesn't love their bed ... loved your write..P.D.
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