Anytime Anthill

Race for Survival Carry This ~ Struggle with That Misdirection Circus

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/29/2018 11:21:00 PM

Race for survival. Yes, they do seem to be in a frenzy, these ants. Carry this, struggle with that. I've seen that too, but my favorite part is "misdirection circus."

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/29/2018 10:03:00 PM

Ha! So apt. Good one my friend. Though I don't know if I know enough to know if that is a Senryu. xomo!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/29/2018 10:51:00 PM

You're adorable, no karate kidding around <3

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/29/2018 10:23:00 PM

Well, I know for sure that I don't know enough to tell the diff b/t and among a hi-q, a senryu, an a-cho, and a How-de-doo! So I think I'll dub it a Hoo-hoo!...Sirius-ly, I'm gonna label it a Senryu (with a little Kung-Fu). :) Grasshopper