Anytime

I could stop anytime I wanted to. the shadows just don't stop following me I could stop anytime I thought to. but overdosing clouds my judgment I could stop anytime I feel to. but hatred keeps me warm I could stop any day I wanted to. but first I have to get through this one I could stop anytime I chose to. but that would be too easy I could stop if you asked me to... But the question is... Would you?

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/19/2010 6:39:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Karis. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/18/2010 2:20:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup Family.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. with luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/17/2010 5:24:00 PM

Wow that was awesome and leaves one to question themselves, enjoyed this one...P.D.