Anything But a Liar

she cried for her child never born
never conceived
for loyalty misplaced 
in a wife married in haste and guilt
repented in all the good years of leisure
sick of himself for excuses
made 
to avoid the horror of
reality
she was a relentless ***** and master manipulator
never a good friend or real 
wife
never anything but a 
liar
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
June 13, 2009 at 6:50 AM
Tough write. Sometimes it's more dependency than love that keeps two together. This was a look at the "horror of reality." Vince
Joe Avatar
February 5, 2009 at 5:14 AM
'sick of himself for excuses' is great. It allows the poem to exude a sonnet form as that line suggests a turn in the narrative from the inner feeling to the way that feeling is interpretated. I think that the lack of grammatic rules also gives a sense of anarchy (anything goes) to the poem. Well structured and a very punchy poem.
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