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Anyone Who Had a Heart

She found a love she thought was true, A love that was her every dream But love's a tango just for two, And one heart does not make a team The look of love was in her eyes "Anyone who had a heart" could see, But a broken heart was her consolation prize A captive of love, not yet free He'd found another to fill with his charms But to him alone her heart was drawn, Wishing it was her he held in his arms She hung on to a love which was long gone Anyone could see she loved him from the start That is, "anyone who had a heart" ~ 6-12-18 Sonnet's Salutation Poetry Contest William Kekaula

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Date: 12/30/2021 5:04:00 PM
A great write for all the hearts filled with essential love. Congratulations
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Date: 7/13/2018 8:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful!
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Date: 7/13/2018 7:37:00 PM
back with GRATS. We both won, but poor Teppo is unable to put up the results except over at the blog. Congrats for an awesome placement
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Date: 7/13/2018 10:46:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on your first place win, Joseph.
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Date: 7/13/2018 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Joseph. . Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/13/2018 8:46:00 AM
Swinging back with BIG congratulations for your well-deserved first place win! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 7/9/2018 4:39:00 PM
So very sad Joseph. It kills my heart to see things like this in life.
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Joseph May
Date: 7/13/2018 5:47:00 AM
Thank you Flo
Date: 6/12/2018 7:15:00 PM
Joseph, an emotionally driven write that leaves the reader to muse.. powerful!
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Joseph May
Date: 6/13/2018 4:36:00 AM
Thank you Chance
Date: 6/12/2018 5:51:00 PM
"...one heart doesn't make a team." Very profound line, Joseph. It is very difficult to move forward after losing a love in this fashion. It's been more than six years for me and I still have no desire to date again. I'm adding this poem to my faves as it holds special meaning. Excellent writing! Hugs, Carolyn
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Joseph May
Date: 6/12/2018 6:46:00 PM
Thank you for making it one of your faves Carolyn, and you are right, it is so difficult to move on after the loss of a loved one..best wishes
Date: 6/12/2018 5:42:00 PM
I immediately thought of that song when I saw your title. You captured its essence just right!
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Joseph May
Date: 6/12/2018 6:17:00 PM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 6/12/2018 2:55:00 PM
joseph, so mellow and deeply heartfelt is this poem.. enjoyed much!..huggs
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Joseph May
Date: 6/12/2018 6:16:00 PM
Thank you Nette
Date: 6/12/2018 10:41:00 AM
Hi Joseph, I always loved this song and you did it superlative justice with this amazing piece! Love it, my friend! Best regards and hugs. Pandita
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Joseph May
Date: 6/12/2018 10:46:00 AM
Thank you so much Pandita, Hugs
Date: 6/12/2018 9:59:00 AM
Well written, Joseph. Hard to love someone that doesn't love you back,. I know from experience!
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Joseph May
Date: 6/12/2018 10:11:00 AM
Thank you Daniel, so true, love is not a one way street
Date: 6/12/2018 9:56:00 AM
Well written Joseph. Good luck in the contest :)
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Joseph May
Date: 6/12/2018 9:59:00 AM
Thank you Heidi
Date: 6/12/2018 9:44:00 AM
A story of heartbreak..well crafted Sonnet, Joseph..enjoyed reading this true to life depiction.
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Joseph May
Date: 6/12/2018 9:55:00 AM
Thank you Vijay

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