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Any Drugs?

snuck out at 230 am got some rum some smokes dark sky, warm air not enough never enough dont want her to smell me sneaking is part of the high not too much resistance drove to the crack house smoked some up not feeling that well pain in the arm down my chest sweating home she's waiting shes not stupid no no no ambulance she made me get in the car now I'm scared right now she doesn't know but she knows how many times I deceived her and soon drug tox doesnt lie yes yes he's having a heart attack did you take any drugs bright lights voices any drugs? any drugs (are these the last words I will hear?) No

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Date: 8/26/2009 6:20:00 PM
sad but a good write to help others SEE the light! Light & Love
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Date: 8/25/2009 1:37:00 PM
extra scary when it happens in your family - don't look the other way -
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Date: 8/25/2009 1:28:00 PM
I am sure that would be a scary situation. That is happening so much in America today. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/24/2009 1:59:00 PM
Now this is my kind of poem, tell it all and to the bone...excellent write Veronica!!! Thanks for your review of Rotten Apples. I wrote that for some in the last poetry site I was on..they did not like, I don't knew WHY...thanks Danny
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Date: 8/22/2009 11:26:00 AM
Its a hard life ... been there, done that and abstinence has been good to me ... smile ... great write here, Veronica with a message for those who think its cool ... smile ...
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Date: 8/22/2009 9:05:00 AM
Drugs and all the consequences--well penned--charma
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Date: 8/20/2009 1:58:00 PM
As a reformed alcoholic I can get into this one. Everything goes along real nice...then it catches up with you. Good write. Love, daver
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