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Anxieties Climb

You're worried he hasn't called though he didn't say he would. And wait for the phone to ring, knowing he'd call if he could. You peer out of the window once more for the hundredth time. And when there is still no sign, anxieties start to climb. You wonder why; he's so late, maybe it's a traffic jam. Or perhaps he's at some bar, and just doesn't give a damn! He'd better have an excuse or head home on the double. Yet you pray that he isn't in any sort of trouble. All is quickly forgotten as he pulls into the drive. And you greet him with a kiss, thankful he's home; and alive. (Quatrain) 9/25/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 3/14/2018 1:20:00 PM
A fun read, Emile.
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Date: 3/14/2018 2:10:00 PM
Thanks Line, it's always a pleasure to hear from you. Emile.
Date: 9/26/2015 10:06:00 AM
I have been this woman and it is true - whatever goes through your head while waiting evaporates when you him safe, sound and home. Beautiful job listing all the feelings so poetically - great flow and rhyme ... CayCay
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Date: 9/26/2015 11:22:00 AM
Thanks CayCay, it's always a pleasure to hear from you. Emile.
Date: 9/26/2015 5:36:00 AM
This is filled will chilling thoughts that culminate with a happy ending. Hard not to think the worst.Great writing Emile!
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Date: 9/26/2015 8:16:00 AM
Thanks Connie, I appreciate your encouraging comments. Emile.
Date: 9/25/2015 10:49:00 PM
The excitement of seeing the one you love overtakes the doubt. Wonderful true thoughts through life's experiences. Nice write Emile.
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Date: 9/26/2015 8:17:00 AM
Thanks Michael, your comments are appreciated. Emile.
Date: 9/25/2015 9:13:00 PM
yes, that would make one's anxiety climb!! Also well described is the relief that comes when all turns out right!
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Date: 9/26/2015 8:18:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, I welcome your comments. Emile.
Date: 9/25/2015 4:45:00 PM
Dear Emile This is what I'm feeling right now, I'm waiting for my hubby to come home from work and he's late, lol this is so funny, you've nailed this moment within my life, wow, cool but really wired, love the poem it quite good and personally relivant for many of us men and women alike, cheir
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Date: 9/26/2015 8:19:00 AM
Thanks so much Cherl, Your comments are always welcome. Emile.
Date: 9/25/2015 1:38:00 PM
A paint a picture of the worried wife and the thoughts running through her mind.
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Date: 9/25/2015 1:40:00 PM
Thanks Tim, I appreciate your visits. Emile.
Date: 9/25/2015 12:14:00 PM
a beautiful muse you must have, I felt your love :), jill
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Date: 9/25/2015 1:40:00 PM
Ah, what a beautiful thing to say, thank you. Emile.
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