David O'Neal Poet Rhyme

Anticipation

A Post! A Post! Anticipating response
             Approval yearning--Acceptance burning--
                Who will send a line to quench this churning?
  A sharpened line will not due 
           nor a circle that does not lead back to U.
              A hint of intimacy--makes this heart glow
                 Who will send a line to anchor this soul?

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 9, 2011 at 12:00 PM Welcome to PoetrySoup David. I know this is a late welcome but, I have some very pressing matters going on at the present time. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next couple of weeks. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit February 8, 2011 at 3:18 AM Welcome to this site. I know you are going to like it here.

Dana Smith February 5, 2011 at 7:55 PM Absolutely wonderful. Enjoyed. Take care. Dana'lynn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 5, 2011 at 6:57 PM Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing ..with luv..

John Freeman February 5, 2011 at 2:30 PM Well hello again, appreciate you comments they are important to me. Where do you hail from? You must write some more verses! I suggest using the Rhyme, Limerick or dodoitsu if you are just starting. just click at the left bottom "Forms Of Poetry!: This will explain fhe forms. Agape, Moses

Poet Destroyer A February 4, 2011 at 4:56 PM love this one, enjoyed the read David,..p.d.

John Freeman February 4, 2011 at 5:41 AM A rhyme for form will do for now. Great rhymes put together well! Welcome to the soup! Agape, Moses