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Anticipation

Temptations teasing in the night as embers glow within the pit just you and I in pale moon light that begs our passions to submit I see the look within your eyes and tender smile that beckons me a promise of love’s sweet surprise I know this night was meant to be and as you reach and touch my arm my yearning heart begins to race with longings just to know your charms and feel your sighs upon my face temptations prodding to pursue as stars peek down from up above; our time is now, I beg of you ...please don’t make me wait for love.
April 17, 2021

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Date: 4/18/2021 9:42:00 AM
Anticipation is such a sweet yet painful process. Well expressed John.
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/18/2021 11:40:00 AM
More sweet than painful I think, assuming you don’t have to wait too long. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Richard, I appreciate it. John
Date: 4/18/2021 6:48:00 AM
A romantic well rhymed poem John. Loads of passion and definite longing within your creative write. Hope you are keeping well my friend. Though I'd drop by and say Hi. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/18/2021 7:50:00 AM
Hi Jenn, thanks for stopping by, its good to hear from you. All is well here, I hope you and your family are well too. Glad you enjoyed my poem. Take good care my friend. Hugs, John
Date: 4/17/2021 6:39:00 PM
Wonderful write. I love it. God bless you friend, Love, Gina
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/18/2021 5:19:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gina, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Hugs, John
Date: 4/17/2021 6:11:00 PM
Oh my ! This is playful and passionate, all at the same time. Teasing all the senses. I can also feel the longing within, that sweet ache. Your thoughts hold many emotions, my dear friend. I am saving this in my favorites. Because.. :) Hugs, Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/18/2021 5:17:00 AM
Passions seem to rise in the soft glow of the moon. Thank you so much for your thoughts and comments, Brandy, and for saving it to your favorites. Hugs.
Date: 4/17/2021 3:14:00 PM
Hello John Gondolf, I sense the urge for love. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/18/2021 11:07:00 AM
Hello John yes the urge for love is in the moonlight. Hugs Darlene
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/18/2021 5:10:00 AM
Hi Darlene, thanks for sharing your thoughts. The urge for love is strong in the soft moonlight. Hugs, John
Date: 4/17/2021 9:00:00 AM
a burning yearning!
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/18/2021 5:07:00 AM
A burning yearning indeed, thanks for stopping by. John

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