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Anticipating the Wait

Legs slowly extend moments push and bend I sigh must the morning end as sun meets the skin deep sigh Eyes close once again sheets are folding in oh my Fingers are tracing a day in waiting like this air is exciting lips are inviting oh yes Stay in my morning anticipating such bliss
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~ moments worth waiting for ~ Something playful and romantic Form of Poetry - Lai The lai is another French form. It’s a nine-line poem or stanza that uses an “a” and “b” rhyme following this pattern: aabaabaab. The lines with an “a” rhyme use 5 syllables; the “b” rhyme lines have 2 syllables. It feels kind of like organized skeltonic verse.

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Date: 1/31/2024 11:08:00 AM
I enjoyed the anticipation of bliss Brandy, Lovely write
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/1/2024 11:59:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph. Moments within are soft and sensual. Sweet bliss, indeed. Your kind words are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 9/20/2018 9:41:00 AM
Very sensual poem Brandy...
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/20/2018 12:43:00 PM
It is playfully sensual. Thank you Silent One. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Date: 9/15/2018 12:51:00 PM
A beautiful morn it is, my poetic friend...for you're rays of poetic verses brighten up my dark abyss lol...I'm running out of butter lol...love & morning bliss...^WW^
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/15/2018 4:51:00 PM
Light shinning from my poetic pen seems to be melting your darkness. :) Sweet morning bliss indeed, when moments are like this. Running out of butter, are you?? Lol. Thank you WW. Smiles in the Sunshine. :) Brandy
Date: 9/15/2018 8:13:00 AM
I read this as the sun rises..such beauty
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/15/2018 12:38:00 PM
Thank Tim. Yes, the beauty of the sunrise kissing the skin. :) Brandy
Date: 9/14/2018 3:59:00 PM
Such peace radiate your lines...joy of being alive and the sensations that awake your smiles....Lucky you...Lovely write...All the best Brandy...leave a little for the rest of us...
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/14/2018 8:19:00 PM
Thank you Arturo. :) It is a wonderful feeling indeed, being alive- wrapped around sweet moments. Lucky me?? I am blushing now. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy
Date: 9/14/2018 3:25:00 PM
So beautiful , Brandy, this is a wonderful way to wake up and the best way to start a day. Very sensual if you just read the two syllable lines...beautiful whispers my friend. John
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/14/2018 3:50:00 PM
:) The entire poem holds that sensual feeling. Dreamy thoughts before waking to meet the day. Wanting to stay!! Thank you John. You and your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 9/14/2018 12:45:00 PM
Beautiful and sensual and the best way to get each and every day. Really nice Brandy
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/14/2018 3:43:00 PM
Thank you Chris. If every morning curled around me like this, it would be bliss. I appreciate your thoughts. :) Brandy

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