Charlie Smith Poet Free verse

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Together we closed our eyes
     and softly left the bonds of fate.

     Drifting with the clouds, 
     listening to rainbows whisper,
     silently, such prayerful answers.

     And in that instant came to know
     that we were not alone...

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Wendy Rycroft February 11, 2017 at 3:00 PM I love this Charlie great poem x ((((Just wondered what you really look like)))) LOL x Charlie Smith February 12, 2017 at 7:44 AM This is not my picture. It's an oil painting of an old fisherman that I just happen to like. I do have a beard, but with a little less character than this gent, thanks Wendy...

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri January 31, 2017 at 8:01 AM I'm not sure whether this has a divine intent but I like to think it has. A poem can refer to many things sometimes. A great short freeverse this is, imaginative and surreal. Kudos. Charlie Smith January 31, 2017 at 11:28 AM You are on the mark with the intent of my piece, thank you so much for the comment...

Eve Roper January 26, 2017 at 11:00 PM So soothing , Charlie, love it Charlie Smith January 26, 2017 at 11:01 PM Thank you Ms. Eve...

Andrea Dietrich January 26, 2017 at 8:49 PM such bliss in this!! Charlie Smith January 26, 2017 at 10:43 PM So kind of you to say Dear Andrea, peace be with you...

Judy Ball January 26, 2017 at 6:30 PM Nicely done my friend. It's such a comfort to know that we are not alone and He knows what we go through and is willing to help. Great stuff here. God Bless and a 7 from me. JB Charlie Smith January 26, 2017 at 10:41 PM Blessings to you Judy and thanks for the visit...

Wendy Rycroft January 26, 2017 at 3:12 PM Great poem Charlie, very poetic x Charlie Smith January 26, 2017 at 10:39 PM Thank you Wendy...

Robert Lindley January 26, 2017 at 7:04 AM BEAUTIFUL, AND WE ARE NOT ALONE. WE NEVER HAVE BEEN, SINCE BEFORE THE UNIVERSE WAS CREATED, GOD PLANNED FOR US TO BE HIS CHILDREN. Charlie Smith January 26, 2017 at 10:28 AM Thank you Robert...

Winged Warrior January 25, 2017 at 10:15 PM Unequivocally beautiful Charlie...god bless...and god listens...^WW^ Charlie Smith January 25, 2017 at 10:18 PM Thank you WW, peace be with you friend...

Tim Smith January 25, 2017 at 9:39 PM This is great Charlie...we are not alone Charlie Smith January 25, 2017 at 10:16 PM Thank you MR. Tim, you are most gracious...

Agnes Krampe January 25, 2017 at 3:49 PM Beautiful, Charlie, just beautiful. Charlie Smith January 25, 2017 at 8:33 PM You are so very nice Agnes, thank you...