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Together we closed our eyes and softly left the bonds of fate. Drifting with the clouds, listening to rainbows whisper, silently, such prayerful answers. And in that instant came to know that we were not alone...

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Wendy Rycroft

Date: 2/11/2017 3:00:00 PM

I love this Charlie great poem x ((((Just wondered what you really look like)))) LOL x

Charlie Smith
Date: 2/12/2017 7:44:00 AM

This is not my picture. It's an oil painting of an old fisherman that I just happen to like. I do have a beard, but with a little less character than this gent, thanks Wendy...

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 1/31/2017 8:01:00 AM

I'm not sure whether this has a divine intent but I like to think it has. A poem can refer to many things sometimes. A great short freeverse this is, imaginative and surreal. Kudos.

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/31/2017 11:28:00 AM

You are on the mark with the intent of my piece, thank you so much for the comment...

Eve Roper

Date: 1/26/2017 11:00:00 PM

So soothing , Charlie, love it

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/26/2017 11:01:00 PM

Thank you Ms. Eve...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2017 8:49:00 PM

such bliss in this!!

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/26/2017 10:43:00 PM

So kind of you to say Dear Andrea, peace be with you...

Judy Ball

Date: 1/26/2017 6:30:00 PM

Nicely done my friend. It's such a comfort to know that we are not alone and He knows what we go through and is willing to help. Great stuff here. God Bless and a 7 from me. JB

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/26/2017 10:41:00 PM

Blessings to you Judy and thanks for the visit...

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 1/26/2017 3:12:00 PM

Great poem Charlie, very poetic x

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/26/2017 10:39:00 PM

Thank you Wendy...