Answerku 1

will her soul be reclaimed?
boulders to pebbles,
it's a mind game



NOTE: This was my Answerku to Richard Lamoureux's Questionku that goes likes this...

dreams slip away
visit to surgeon
will her soul be reclaimed?

Personally I like being including both the answer and the question in the same poem... that's what I like about mondo. Either way these writing exercises and fun... especially since they are co-written you'll never know where the other poets mind will lead.
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Callus Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 4:28 PM
This is quite interesting, Timothy. Probably that mountain was nothing to worry about, after all. The mind often turns molehills into mountains. @ Regards // paul
Hicks Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 12:26 PM
Thanks - again - for dipping into my older poems. To be honest, this one completely fell from my mind ... I don't even remember what my intended meaning was with these very sparse words!
Sivey Avatar
May 12, 2013 at 4:40 PM
This is a wonderful and enlightening write my friend! You have delighted me by the splendor of this incredible poem! What a powerful message you two have expressed!
Hicks Avatar
May 12, 2013 at 9:51 PM
Thanks as ever Russell. It's interesting to see what happens when two poets merge their thinking boxes... lol.
Manassian Avatar
May 12, 2013 at 12:04 PM
Lovely! Nice to see you are working with Richard...... Take care! :) It is a great write, by the way!
Hicks Avatar
May 12, 2013 at 9:51 PM
Thanks Eileen. It's fun to try new things and branch out...
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