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Answered Prayer

I prayed for rain to visit us and to refresh our souls....
The heavens heard, and opened up, pouring water down the rice fields,
Washing off the seedlings that we had planted for a week.



** June 6, 2010 ^_^

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Eve Roper Date: 1/29/2015 4:32:00 PM Wala, love the spirtual and imagery on this write, a 7. Blessings dear friend Eve Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/11/2010 10:11:00 PM good morning, wow you really where not kidding about being on the down low. just here saying hi,..p.d. Login to Reply

Date: 6/10/2010 12:37:00 PM What an uplifting poem. Yes, prayers are answered--though not always the way we want them. Good use of imagery. Blessings to you for sharing this poem with us. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/10/2010 4:01:00 AM God hears and answers our prayers...Sometimes it seems that he doesn't but he does...Hope that the seedlings get a good start and have an abundant life...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara Login to Reply

Adell Foster Date: 6/7/2010 9:55:00 PM Marvelous imagery, and figurative language, truly captivates the minds eye of the reader. Thank you for sharing ;-) Blessings, Always, Adell Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 6/6/2010 5:36:00 AM Maybe the harvest wasn't as good as was expected.. Washing it away gives one a chance to start over.. An opportunity to do it better?? :) just me thinking further ~ WN Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 6/6/2010 4:40:00 AM GOOD MORNING NIKKO, SOMETIMES WE WILL ENDURE MORE THAN WHAT WE BARGIN 4. NOT A GOOD PRICE 2 PAY AFTER ALL THAT WORK. HAVE YOURSELF A BLESSED SUNDAY DEAR.-SKAT Login to Reply

Sharon Tideswell Date: 6/6/2010 12:11:00 AM Hi Nikko :) A real case of 'be careful what you wish for', great twist of irony in your third line. After reading your sijo I think I finally understand the requirements of the form. Good luck if this is for a contest. TTYS Sharon :) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/6/2010 12:00:00 AM woe I did not even see if this was for a contest cool if it is . Good luck, just stopping by again,..p.d. Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 6/5/2010 10:50:00 PM Great entry. I think you did this one perfectly. Good luck. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/5/2010 9:53:00 PM A great write Nikko for the Sijo contest.. some great entries for Rick to judge.. this one is very refreshing ..sweet and simple yet powerful ..luv.. Linda-Marie. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/5/2010 9:21:00 PM here enjoying your entry and Chris A.'s comment. No the one person has not send me the okay. Ha ha the main one. Also love your SIJO. Sad you will be on here that much. I will head back to my nite sleep. I see you have many poems right now. I will get to them as soon as I awake. take care,..p.d. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/5/2010 8:27:00 PM A perfect Sijo with nice thoughts Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/5/2010 8:18:00 PM Nikko, I really like this, but I want to make sure about something. Did it end up being a bad thing, was it so much rain that it washed AWAY the seeds?(that is how I interpreted washed off) If so, wow, that is quite a twist THIS one has too! Maybe the best of your sijo I saw tonight. well, the time is just flying and I still have SO much to do. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply