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Answered and Decided

my feet on the edge..

                      the icy cliff of life holds..

                                    arms spread wide, eyes closed..


            trying to swallow the air..

                            that's carrying my wings home..






inspired by Lizzy B.

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Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

December 19, 2010 at 5:23 AM

Wonderful message filled with imagery Michael...Lay

Wilma Neels

December 16, 2010 at 8:42 PM

A beautiful Tanka with a message Michael, enjoyed this morning.. Silly me are awake @ 05h30 when I am on holiday.. Lol go figure ;) enjoy the day ahead, love W

Andrea Dietrich

December 16, 2010 at 4:49 PM

Hmmm, headed home is right!! An interesting explanation for "Answered and Decided" here! I like this one. And say, you never had a ragtop? Then GET one. they are so cool. even though i will be in my 60's by the time I can get another one again(gotta wait now for Kia to become and OLD love before I get rid of her) I need to insist to my hubbie that my next car is gonna be convertible once again!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 16, 2010 at 4:24 PM

Wonderful Tanka Michael... enjoyed this view from your creative pen tonight ... ready for some Thursday night football luv? Jersey Girl shivering in the snow..luv..

Elizabeth Bark

December 16, 2010 at 2:36 PM

adorable...i wish i could write like that...i envy your writing skill everytime i read anything of yours....with love always and forever...lizzy.b <3333