Answer To God

There once was this old lady who
 bought me some shoes
and a pretty little dress that match 
them too 

It wouldn't be long before her 
trustworthy smile began to radiate
her grotesque and manipulative style

A woman so close, that is respected 
by my father which is how she gained
the trust of my one and only mother

Lies and deception are a normal way
of life..A facade behind their truth
so by the time my mommy will 
have learned, that my daddy was 
deceptive too

Now we are divided, and forced  
to be apart but believe me
 "devil woman" the punishment
will be swift and hard

Because you won't get away with 
stealing ones kid, that is why God
said.......he will be pulling
your husbands name next from
his list

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/13/2009 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured writing. Every word of this poem has a special meaning. Your emotions are clearly heartfelt. Bless you. ~Milt~
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great poem. So glad this was featured! Congratulations! ~Trudy~
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Date: 9/11/2009 6:28:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem,.; I love your style. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 9/8/2009 5:43:00 PM
Donna - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, mj
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Donna, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week>>James
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Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Donna. Love, Carol
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