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Answer To God

There once was this old lady who bought me some shoes and a pretty little dress that match them too It wouldn't be long before her trustworthy smile began to radiate her grotesque and manipulative style A woman so close, that is respected by my father which is how she gained the trust of my one and only mother Lies and deception are a normal way of life..A facade behind their truth so by the time my mommy will have learned, that my daddy was deceptive too Now we are divided, and forced to be apart but believe me "devil woman" the punishment will be swift and hard Because you won't get away with stealing ones kid, that is why God said.......he will be pulling your husbands name next from his list

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Date: 9/13/2009 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured writing. Every word of this poem has a special meaning. Your emotions are clearly heartfelt. Bless you. ~Milt~
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Date: 9/11/2009 9:58:00 AM
great poem. So glad this was featured! Congratulations! ~Trudy~
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Date: 9/11/2009 6:28:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem,.; I love your style. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 9/8/2009 5:43:00 PM
Donna - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, mj
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Date: 9/8/2009 12:39:00 PM
Donna, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 9/7/2009 3:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 9/7/2009 7:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Donna. Love, Carol
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