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Answer On a Bed of Nails

Should it be a poet's duty To write solely about beauty? A POET’S DUTY by BETH EVANS ANSWER ON A BED OF NAILS let me answer the quixotic brioche — we all need a delicate pinch; brachial bruising a warning all the flowery talk dispels the magnitude of cancer, the carbuncle of abuse, the horrific salutations of the nazi regime we march alone but also as a world arm in arm, armed with insecticide words like ants; a bench’s rash a hose in diffusion’s spray may try to paint the sky in shades of love’s foray turn it off; let flow subside take a better look — heart on a bed of nails war of words; a twisting sword let truth be the blood that scores because a poet can also whitewash with parrots mimic...mimic...mimicking seek your bellyache examine, test, squander all its savings let cavalry of water fall soaking wet with poet’s ink 10/9/2020 Beth Evans’ A Poet's Duty Poetry Contest

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Date: 10/21/2020 1:44:00 PM
Hi Kim, an absolutely Crystal clear poem A juggernaut of poetic prowess, little wonder it’s a winner and deservedly so, Oozes quality cheers David
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2020 5:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, David!
Date: 10/21/2020 11:43:00 AM
Wow, this is stunning, Kim! So deserving of a top win. Congratulations! (A new fave for me.) Hugs, Carolyn
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2020 5:48:00 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Date: 10/21/2020 9:06:00 AM
Wonderful words, sweet lady. Congrats on your win and I appreciate your loving, tender spirit... it makes my heart beat with joy! You're a blessing to me. God bless you always
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2020 9:13:00 AM
As you are to me. My words are quick, having work to go to soon. God bless with a bug hug!
Date: 10/21/2020 8:52:00 AM
Wow, Kim, amazing poem. Some real fresh thoughts and phrases here. Congrats on your well-deserved win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2020 9:14:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 10/21/2020 7:34:00 AM
Strong write Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2020 8:09:00 AM
Thank you, James!
Date: 10/20/2020 11:12:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2020 4:53:00 AM
Thank you, Beata!
Date: 10/20/2020 9:05:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2020 4:53:00 AM
Thank you, Anisha!
Date: 10/20/2020 7:11:00 PM
Had a feeling about this drum-banger, Kim. Congrats on your #1 win in the contest! Way to go! Blue Ribbon without the Beer, gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2020 7:26:00 PM
Thanks for always bringing the humor! :)
Date: 10/13/2020 8:28:00 PM
Good luck in this contest. This missive was clever all the way through, as usual.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/14/2020 9:33:00 AM
Thanks so much!
Date: 10/10/2020 9:18:00 AM
Enjoyed the read...Even in beauty there's sadness...we're living a complete life...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/10/2020 9:41:00 AM
Yes, a complete life has both. Blessings to you, Arturo!
Date: 10/9/2020 11:25:00 AM
A poet should write on anything that inspires him/her, good or bad. light or dark so long as it is poetry. The reader will chose what strikes him best.~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/9/2020 1:52:00 PM
The writing is the poet and the reader takes it farther.
Date: 10/9/2020 11:21:00 AM
Whoa! Dripping with blood and violent passion, I like your hard right turn from flowery pap! Go, girl!! ~ Bang the drum loudly, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/9/2020 1:53:00 PM
LOL...thank you for giving me hearty laughs! I need them!

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