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Another Trip

On my iron pony
Another trip to buy beer
Holding life steady.

Copyright © Abe Lopez | Year Posted 2008

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July 12, 2011 at 10:38 AM

Congrats on having your priceless poem featured this week. Keep your poetry pen dancing to the drumbeat of your poetry passion. Wishing many more features. Love to you always, Adeleke

Vince Suzadail Jr.

July 11, 2011 at 8:10 PM

Congrats Abe on your senryu "Another Trip" being featured. Vince

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 10, 2011 at 12:29 PM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Abe. Love, Carol

September 11, 2009 at 2:17 PM

Kool trip Abe, may i join you>>James

December 21, 2008 at 5:57 PM

I can see Braun riding his bike to buy some more beer, holding his bike steady. Great Senryu...Raul

December 17, 2008 at 10:28 AM

Funny, because you don't drink or ride a cycle. Must be about someone else!

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