Another Trip

On my iron pony Another trip to buy beer Holding life steady.

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Adeleke Adeite

Date: 7/12/2011 10:38:00 AM

Congrats on having your priceless poem featured this week. Keep your poetry pen dancing to the drumbeat of your poetry passion. Wishing many more features. Love to you always, Adeleke

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 7/11/2011 8:10:00 PM

Congrats Abe on your senryu "Another Trip" being featured. Vince

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/10/2011 12:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Abe. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 9/11/2009 2:17:00 PM

Kool trip Abe, may i join you>>James

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/21/2008 5:57:00 PM

I can see Braun riding his bike to buy some more beer, holding his bike steady. Great Senryu...Raul

Anna Kittrell

Date: 12/17/2008 10:28:00 AM

Funny, because you don't drink or ride a cycle. Must be about someone else!