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Another To You

I used to be your shinning moon, now I'm just another star.. Just another story in your book, far distant from your heart.. Just another flower in your garden, another song you've forgotten, and another reason for the tears on your face..

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Date: 1/6/2010 11:10:00 AM
Thank you ^_^ I suck at titles, I want to change it but I have no other ideas lol help anyone?
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Date: 1/6/2010 10:16:00 AM
We loose in love, yet, it is so profound a desire we keep trying. I don't think anyone ever forgets those they've loved. I really liked your verse...drop down "the tears on your face.." to the next line and it will have all the "punch" it deserves. GOOD writing! Light & Love
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