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Written, October 09, 2023

Poetry/Rhyme/Another Tattered Page
Copyright Protected, ID 10-1584-606-08
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

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I will turn back, back to a tattered page to thirteen and my sorrow at this age I was timid, alone I wore my pain like a heavy black cloak I read and wrote poems and seldom spoke my heart had turned to stone

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Joseph May

Date: 10/10/2023 11:47:00 AM

A painful memory you had to endure Constance, Glad you found solace in writing, hugs

Constance La France
Date: 10/11/2023 7:37:00 AM

Joseph, thank you so much for your comment, appreciate. Yes, lots of painful memories dwell in my mind and it is time to face them. The Lord blessed me with this gift of writing for a reason and perhaps this is the reason.

James Peranteau

Date: 10/10/2023 9:35:00 AM

touching dear poet, at thirteen, i wuz ready to leave home....i pray each day that for every pneuma to smile...i hope whenever you read me, *you smile....have a luving day Constance....much love, james

Constance La France
Date: 10/11/2023 7:38:00 AM

James, so nice to hear from you. Thank you so much for the compliment and comment, appreciate and love.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/9/2023 9:51:00 PM

i have a huge lump in my throat reading your lines and comments Constance, sadly its a scenario too many children face when a new sibling comes along. hugs jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 10/10/2023 8:46:00 AM

Jan, thank you so much for your compassion, appreciate, yes, I felt like I did not belong, like I was from another family, not part of the family love, so my life took a nasty turn at a very young age, but I always had writing as my safe place.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 10/9/2023 4:04:00 AM

Hi Constance: Such a beautiful rhyme encapsulating the isolation that many teens feel. I love the image of the tattered page…. A heart of stone waiting for love to awaken it. Hugs, SuZ

Constance La France
Date: 10/9/2023 1:38:00 PM

Suzanne, thank you so much for the comment, and compliment, appreciate. Yes, many teens feel this way, and sometime they end up taking the wrong path.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/9/2023 2:47:00 AM

Such a poignant and heartfelt poem this is so well expressed and presented as always. I felt this deeply as always, especially those last three lines hit home for me

Ink Empress
Date: 10/10/2023 11:53:00 AM

I feel so sad reading this! Sigh. I feel you deeply and i cant help but think, you are so strong warrior poetess

Constance La France
Date: 10/9/2023 1:43:00 PM

Ink, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, yes, I felt alone, a loner at school, no friends, mom and dad gushing over a new baby girl, a little brother who was chubby cheek cute everyone said, then there was me, the forgotten child, fed, dressed properly, but given no kisses, no hugs, no love. I was drifting away.