Another Sunrise

Sunrise

                        steady rain hides the morn'
                    treetops shades of grey new day
                         never the same way





                                                                               Sunshine Williams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 28, 2015 at 4:40 PM
Deep sunrise. SKAT
Ellison Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 10:02 AM
Not wild about grey days... a necessary evil to balance things out! Great write, my dear Jill!!! Love, Jack xxx
Spagnola Avatar
November 27, 2015 at 4:02 AM
Jack you inspired me to try my first limerick! tell me what you think..it's called Limerick(?)...Hope you had a nice holiday...:),jill
Ellison Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 2:21 PM
This has to be... it's the old Jack and Jill thingy!!! More smackers Jack xoxox
Spagnola Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 1:33 PM
Well I have not met the Jack to my Jill! You have a kind face, I'm going to check out your works.....all the love....:), jill
Ellison Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 11:24 AM
Hey sweetie, perhaps this is the start of a loving relationship... what say you??? Love and big smackers!!! Jack xoxox
Spagnola Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 10:50 AM
So right, Jack...we can't appreciate sunshine if there is never rain! all the love right back at ya......:), jill
Smith Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 6:33 AM
Lovey haiku Jill...a new day beckons
Spagnola Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 6:56 AM
You have a great one Tim!....:), jill
Lane Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 6:33 AM
That's really true, Jill. It's raining here now.
Lane Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 6:59 AM
New Orleans
Spagnola Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 6:57 AM
Where do you hail from Lin?...:), jill
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