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Again words have failed me, creating a blank. I feel like a pirate who's walking the plank. With a head full of thoughts that will plunge to the death. I wish words would flow like the lines of MacBeth. Have surfed through thesaurus, a mad man possessed. Been up for six hours, I'm not even dressed. I'll find it, I know it, it's got to be here. The view in my mind is so perfectly clear. My thoughts go to tea and the comfort it brings. It's coffee that's grounded this bird, clipped its wings. Caffeine is evil, the devil, a curse. I'm riding it's coattails, a corpse in a hearse. "Get back on track!" A voice screams in my head. But this train's been derailed and its passenger's dead. Another poem lost to a wondering mind. Tomorrow the words will be easy to find.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/3/2021 2:58:00 PM
Absolutely fantastic!
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Date: 7/27/2014 7:28:00 AM
I do believe that is just the finest "blank" I have ever read. As smooth as silk and a web so very softly woven my friend! Wicked!!!!
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Robert Nehls
Date: 7/28/2014 7:17:00 AM
Thanks so much for reading this one, Robert. Your comment is very kind. Loosing 600 poems like that would be hard to take. The poison that oozes from hate and spite destroys the person it possesses. To bad it has to affect so many others. Thank you, my friend... Robert.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 7/27/2014 7:33:00 AM
hateful , not hatful. lol
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Robert Lindley
Date: 7/27/2014 7:30:00 AM
The title drew me in and the write slayed me. I once lost a trove of over 600 poems to the actions of a hatful woman. She burned all of them for spite. A decade of poems written when I was in my twenties.
Date: 6/23/2014 10:13:00 AM
Awesome! I love it, :) :)
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Robert Nehls
Date: 6/24/2014 11:27:00 AM
Thank you my wonderful, friend.... Robert.
Date: 6/22/2014 2:25:00 PM
Ha! Robert, you just thought you were drawing a blank; very creative and funny, although...don't blame coffee. If that is the problem, I will never write anything! Thanks for your visits and inspiring comments. Faye
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Robert Nehls
Date: 6/23/2014 1:50:00 AM
Thanks a lot for your comments, Faye. Coffee is only a problem for me if it makes my mind wander around too much. Many times there is a blank page that is the result of this wandering mind. Always a pleasure to hear from you my friend..... Robert.
Date: 6/22/2014 1:45:00 PM
Robert For someone who is going blank, you sure created a fun and creative write. LOL You should go blank more often. Thank you for the sweet comment on my Lost For Words poem.
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Robert Nehls
Date: 6/23/2014 1:56:00 AM
Thanks so much, Robin. I love it when I'm drawing a blank and still come up with something. Appreciate your comments my friend.... Robert.
Date: 6/20/2014 11:36:00 PM
this was a fun one that you wrote. Some very creative lines!!! Good one.
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Robert Nehls
Date: 6/21/2014 7:38:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. The fun ones don't come out as often as I would like but I sure enjoy it when they do. Always nice to hear from you, my wonderful friend. Thanks for reading...... Robert.
Date: 6/20/2014 7:31:00 AM
Lol....we all go through this...start looking at the things closest to you if that doesn't help look inside no luck then up to the sky still no help write about a cry...hmm I think I have an inspiration
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Robert Nehls
Date: 6/21/2014 7:32:00 AM
Glad to help, Tim. Better write it down fast and get it posted. Thanks for the comment, I think it helped..... Robert.

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