Another Place

The first embrace is with the eye,
That sings the soul of love’s sweet song.
A simple kiss, the choral sigh,
No shortened notes that last too long,
As gentle touches softly cry,
To wrap the heart in love’s sarong
The first embrace is with the eye,
That sings the soul of love’s sweet song.
Two hands entwine, no question why,
This gentle thing that walks among
A crazy world that flies on by,
As in this love two hearts belong,
The first embrace is with the eye,
That sings the soul of love’s sweet song.





Form: Rondel Prime
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Williams Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 2:22 AM
Jemmy love it..David
Farmer Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 2:40 AM
Thank you David
Palmer Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 6:15 PM
the first embrace,nice
Farmer Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 2:41 AM
Thank you Richard
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