Another Place

daydreams self-contained

escapism crawled and creeped

daunting nervousness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Pettit Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 10:26 AM
You seem to do well with these senryu entries. This is another great one that I have read.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 12:32 PM
Hello Franci Hoffman, I often day dream of being in anther place. Somewhere by the water. Have a nice day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 6:02 PM
Hello Francis Hoffman,Oh I hope that you enjoyed your little get away. You are welcome. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Hoffman Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 5:01 PM
Thank you, Darlene. We just got back from another place but we were in the mountains! It was lovely but it is good to be home. Thank you for your comment.
Dietrich Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 3:46 PM
sounds kind of twilight zonish!!! Just let the dreams explode!!!
Vangaveti Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 10:01 AM
Diving into an imaginative world is the best thing that can happen sometimes. Enjoyed reading this :)
Hoffman Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 10:31 AM
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)
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