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Waking
Slumber
Another day
One more to sway

My eyes are red
My hopes are dead
I live in dread
In bed

Another day
Another one
Another breath of putrid air
Why

Interludes
Softly mocking me
Musicale morticians
Playing with my mind

Oneness
Nothingness
Meaningless
Vodkaness

Swimming in tears
Arms flaying in past races
Symphonies sounding grandiose themes
I am one with death and her piano keys

I sit as the keys fall to the floor
Sadness absorbed by the empty walls
I am one
With no one

No tunes
No cartoons
Rain and depression strangle my heart
Nothing left at all to give

Wrinkled
Withered
Despair in the king’s castle
Counting gold

One
Bloated and floated
Black liver dancing in the sea
Shouting his oneness

Return
Come back
Touch ne
Humanity

Oneness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/4/2016 5:33:00 PM
Great poem Arthur, this is exactly how I feel right now. Why I haven't been reading or writing poetry. Ha
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/6/2016 1:42:00 AM
I know the feeling well, so I hope the smiles return!
Date: 9/19/2015 1:55:00 PM
Been there many mornings, and even the beauty of music or poetry brings no comfort... Your creative lines capture that feeling and take it deep into the reader's soul... Excellent work, Arthur!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/3/2015 10:38:00 PM
Thank you Kelly, I hear you!
Date: 9/17/2015 3:54:00 PM
Hi there :) Would be you be kind enough to take a look at my page that looks into the Gothic art form :) please feel free to like and share it as well! :) https://www.facebook.com/Raven3.gothic?ref=hl Many thank!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/17/2015 4:17:00 PM
Please stop spamming the site.
Date: 9/12/2015 2:48:00 PM
Has such a weight of sadness to it. Some interesting images in this one, Arthur.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/17/2015 4:24:00 PM
Sorry for the late answer, please do not charge me a $17.00 penalty for this!
Date: 9/10/2015 2:23:00 PM
Hey Arthur, stopped by for a visit. This is a deeply solemn poem. Sometimes a nice, strong drink can help. Very expressive and well written. Be Blessed, Neva
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/17/2015 4:23:00 PM
Thanks Neva, good idea!
Date: 9/9/2015 4:15:00 PM
this is deep and pensive, ever flowing with snippets of greeat lines, arthur.. enjoyed!.. huggs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/17/2015 4:22:00 PM
Thank you Nette :)
Date: 9/9/2015 12:13:00 PM
I was riding this with you. Time to hit happy hour. Liver don't fail me now.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/17/2015 4:22:00 PM
LOL thanks Tim
Date: 9/9/2015 7:34:00 AM
I guess it was one of those weekends, poets pens think alike and drown in the misery of ink...hugs sugar xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/9/2015 10:55:00 AM
Thank you Cas, so true!
Date: 9/8/2015 10:39:00 PM
I seem to recall visiting that place long, long ago. Where darkness births misery and heartache. And cries float on winds of despair and chills of cuts ... Yep, left it behind and never want to go back! Superb write my friend!!! A7
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/9/2015 10:54:00 AM
Thank you Robert
Date: 9/8/2015 9:43:00 PM
Forgive to say, this feels so real and painful, sad beauty xoxoxoxoxoxox
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/9/2015 10:54:00 AM
Thank you for your kindness!
Date: 9/8/2015 12:32:00 AM
Superb write Arthur, we all wait for humanity to arrive, trust it reaches very soon!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/8/2015 1:00:00 AM
Thank you Dr Upma Sharma, I hope as well!!!

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