Another Lousy Lover

I truly am disappointed By such a lack of desire When I think I should inspire That swollen stuff of dreams With a waving Wand anointed By eager, willing hands Spill free his demands Then stuffed back in his jeans!

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Robin Davis

Date: 12/9/2013 9:08:00 AM

Chan Chan You bad bad boy. This is a "dirty" little poem hidden in a fun and crazy write. LOL You need to read my Poem Of Trickery And Fun. Good job Thanks for the honest and great comment on my An Angel Friend Hugs

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 12/9/2013 9:16:00 AM

lol I like to be dirty in an eloquent way ;)

Allen Danie

Date: 8/24/2013 4:50:00 AM

Lousy lover - good titled poem... A~D :)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/24/2013 10:08:00 AM

Thank you, Allen; I appreciate the appreciation ;)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/23/2013 10:38:00 PM

Hi A P., I would say the form is free verse, or a far away rhyme, anyways,,,, about your poem: I don't know much about lousy lovers... LOL, all the ones I had in the past were dummies... ;-) JK..... Very awesome. The ending made sense..... I like your style....LINDA

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/24/2013 10:11:00 AM

Thanks again, Poet D. I don't write many "sexual" type poems, but when I do, I like to do so in sort of an indirect way; "read between the lines", I suppose. Thanks for the compliment and for stopping by :)

Karen Anglesey

Date: 8/23/2013 10:12:00 PM

I like the way you tell it like it is. Crisp lines and great way to express an "unflattering" subject.. I pity this lousy lover ... very creative :)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/24/2013 10:14:00 AM

Thanks, Karen! Like I said in an earlier reply to Poet D., it's not a subject matter that pops up very often in my work, but when it does, I like to be "cheeky" lol :)