Another Lonely Night

You see the world in black in white
Ignoring all the grey
You hear the words you want to hear
Not really hearing what we say.

In truth I think you know 
The way you act is out of line
The way you fill her heart with things
But have another thing in mind.

A woman's heart's an entity
You'll never understand.
You vomit out the sweetest words
But you'll never be a man.
If you can't see the wrong in this
If you really think you're right,
You'll find the in the long run
Your life is just another lonely night.

Why can't you lie beside her, 
And take her by the hand?
Instead you work your silver tongue,
And get just what you planned.

You wonder why she cries so much.
You wonder why she yells,
But you hypnotize her flowing heart,
With all your tricks and spells.

A woman's heart's an entity
You'll never understand.
You vomit out the sweetest words
But you'll never be a man.
If you can't see the wrong in this
If you really think you're right,
You'll find the in the long run
Your life is just another lonely night.

That morning when you wake up,
Balding from your age,
You wish you'd never said those things,
And could turn back the page.

Your life will be so empty,
Perhaps you'll comprehend.
You're sacrificing so much more
Than just another friend.

A woman's heart's an entity
You'll never understand.
You vomit out the sweetest words
But you'll never be a man.
If you can't see the wrong in this
If you really think you're right,
You'll find the in the long run
Your life is just another lonely night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 2/5/2012 6:08:00 PM
Wonderfully written :) I love the rhyme and refrain. Keep writing! ------Ell
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