Another Haiku (Number Twenty One)

Snow storm in springtime
Silhouette of a stark tree
It's a winters tale
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
September 6, 2009 at 10:54 AM
I really like the descriptiveness of this Haiku. Sara
Shahwan Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 3:43 PM
Beautiful A+.
Moreno Avatar
February 20, 2009 at 3:37 AM
Excellent haiku Déirdre, I like the last line...Raul
P. Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 10:05 PM
yea it is!! lovely winter... though harsh its being!! nicely done, Deirdre! thank you for your sweet comments!! appreciate them!! have a great day! ~ Arany
Degenhardt Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 9:07 AM
Oh the clarity in this keeps me in winter, though the days are doing their best to get warmer. Excellent form and read. Michael
Gass Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 8:23 AM
Awesome Haiku. Vivid images are created here. The weather does what it will. Thanks for sharing! Love, Robin
Strand Avatar
February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Like the twist in L3 Deirdre.Keep them a'coming.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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February 8, 2009 at 12:10 PM
Yes! I like the interaction of a late snowstorm with the idea of winter's tale. You may want to change winters to winter's in the last line. Nice use of imagery. Enjoyed this one. Thank you for your kind comments on my cinquain. Have a nice day. Karen
Kelly Avatar
February 8, 2009 at 8:52 AM
And , it wags today !! , Great 21 , Deirdre ...
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