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another glorious attack

i write slam better than anyone around i leave you screaming without the sound no-one can handle my lyrical style i outstrip you all by a country mile spitting these words without restraint with your blood the walls i'll paint your head falls off when you read my words more taboo than the bees and the birds if only this site would let me swear you'd be picking chunks of vomit right out your hair because i'm sicker than a dirty joke make no mistake i'm not an ordinary bloke got a mind that can think in several dimensions i knock you down if you have pretentions don't even try and take me on you can't win i'll send your poems to the bargain bin my intellect and wit outshines all i can build you up and i can make you fall black and blue from verbal attacks look theres a rock quick get back.... under it if not i'll sunder it i'll kick you to the curb with a noun and a heavy adverb i could go on and on and on but i really feel like i am done i embarass all who assail me if you dont like it. tough. you cant jail me my sparkling put downs will never fail me so if you feel brave try and comeback at me i'll make you get down on both knees a slap in your face you are a complete disgrace

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Date: 5/23/2014 6:57:00 PM
you are a good rhymer, not a slammer... LOL...Love Linda
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Date: 6/13/2010 4:04:00 PM
It is a shame Daniel, i have you down as a favorite poet. you are awesome... but you never read my pitiful work...love your slams.... i would really love for you to show me a thing or two.... this girly does not slam hard like yours....lol this is awesome,,bye,..Sidney leeAnn
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Date: 5/29/2010 7:05:00 AM
LOL, I WOULD LOVE 2 C (P.D.) COME AT U. THIS IS AWESOME. YOU SAID IT ALL IN 1. NO NEED FOR ME TO ATTACK U. U R NOW ONE OF MY MOST FAVORITE POETS. TA TA,,SKAT
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Date: 5/25/2010 8:24:00 PM
A very nice slam with superb rhyming. Thanks for your comments on my work
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