Another Glorious Attack

i write slam better than anyone around
i leave you screaming without the sound
no-one can handle my lyrical style
i outstrip you all by a country mile
spitting these words without restraint
with your blood the walls i'll paint
your head falls off when you read my words
more taboo than the bees and the birds

if only this site would let me swear
you'd be picking chunks of vomit right out your hair
because i'm sicker than a dirty joke
make no mistake i'm not an ordinary bloke
got a mind that can think in several dimensions
i knock you down if you have pretentions

don't even try and take me on you can't win
i'll send your poems to the bargain bin
my intellect and wit outshines all
i can build you up and i can make you fall
black and blue from verbal attacks
look theres a rock quick get back....
under it
if not i'll sunder it
i'll kick you to the curb
with a noun and a heavy adverb

i could go on and on and on
but i really feel like i am done
i embarass all who assail me
if you dont like it. tough. you cant jail me
my sparkling put downs will never fail me
so if you feel brave try and comeback at me
i'll make you get down on both knees
a slap in your face
you are a complete disgrace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/23/2014 6:57:00 PM
you are a good rhymer, not a slammer... LOL...Love Linda
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Date: 6/13/2010 4:04:00 PM
It is a shame Daniel, i have you down as a favorite poet. you are awesome... but you never read my pitiful work...love your slams.... i would really love for you to show me a thing or two.... this girly does not slam hard like yours....lol this is awesome,,bye,..Sidney leeAnn
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Date: 5/29/2010 7:05:00 AM
LOL, I WOULD LOVE 2 C (P.D.) COME AT U. THIS IS AWESOME. YOU SAID IT ALL IN 1. NO NEED FOR ME TO ATTACK U. U R NOW ONE OF MY MOST FAVORITE POETS. TA TA,,SKAT
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Date: 5/25/2010 8:24:00 PM
A very nice slam with superb rhyming. Thanks for your comments on my work
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