Another Empty Soul

Sitting there empty hearted
With no place to go

People putting you down
Loving to see you hurt

The love and      you see
Is what you hope you won't have to be

Scary nights
Living days

I have another empty soul
Wanna come break it more?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Wiggins Avatar
December 9, 2008 at 8:52 PM
I don't know what to say because I feel they same way. Great write.
Payne Avatar
December 4, 2008 at 1:21 PM
So much emotion in this, this was a really good write, you wrote with your heart. I think a lot of people can relate to this. Hang in there, ~Michaela~
Loving Iii Avatar
November 20, 2008 at 2:52 PM
high school is another form of a battle field. you have to dodge the bullets but if you get hit you have to git up and keep running if your not shooting. comprimising between the two sets of rules. sometimes it WWJD other times it hit and run. but the main thing is to stay cool by keeping your mouth shut. then your cool. john
Kane Jr. Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 9:29 AM
maybe i shouldnt call you then...maybe its better if i dont
Sparks Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 12:48 AM
This one reminds me of my freshman year of highschool....it realy works at putting those fealings into words, i tried to add u on m y s p a c e but u have it set to private
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