Get Your Premium Membership

Another Earthly Transient

I observe the far constellations with the hurry of a passerby; the lightness of my steps becomes-the shadow of another earthly transient. Galileo never missed one, he refused to be that cynical astrologer; his work started an evolution-the age of invention for another earthly transient. Aristotle had respect for Nature and its creatures, an astute philosopher; his theories seem so intricate-the pure philosophy of another earthly transient. World power reflects that of the Roman Empire: belligerent and cruel; another emperor will reign and become-the image of another earthly transient. I am the philosopher that no one hears-an unappreciated thinker; my testimony bears a hard truth that scares all-Am I another earthly transient?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/5/2016 1:17:00 AM
Hi Andrew, your poem is nice but has some problems as ghazal. The rhyming of Ghazal is AA bA cA dA eA etc. with and without refrain. Poetry soup has a great example of this style of poetry. Please click on the word ghazal that you selected. It will help you or email me.
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things