Another Demi Sonnet

Come fluttering words,come drifting words to me
A SYMBOL OF LOVE
ah,yes
he loves me still,
such compliments...
these flowers,thrill,
The aroma of love
lingers in his heart

never, now to depart

Brian Strand July 16 WHAT IS SHE THINKING contest

WATERHOUSE PAINTING the shrine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
July 28, 2011 at 1:21 PM
My congratulations on the this win in the contest of Constance,Brian
Brown Avatar
July 28, 2011 at 8:00 AM
Congratulations on your special poem placing in Constance La France's "What is she thinking" contest Brian. Love, Carol
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July 28, 2011 at 12:12 AM
Congrats Brian on your stunning win with these stellar words of poetic art luv..
Asare Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 2:04 PM
good and brief
Okubo Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 7:01 AM
Lovely. Well presented with great imagery.
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