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Another Dead End

diversion the avenue closed not even a toll grants further passage a travelling circus waits at the roundabout all exits closed until further notice traffic lights on red alert department of transport in administered logic regulates apathy trees alongside hang on for dear life construction workers excavate fearful roots no U turn allowed fixed penalty fee points on my license for not moving on a perilous overpass meets the illusion of tunnel vision on borrowed time my mind inches forward stagnant collision course slowly I shake off the duvet tomorrow will be another escape 26th August 2021

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Date: 9/25/2021 11:56:00 AM
Intriguing conception, Kai, engaging from the onset with every line that opportunes a venturing thought. My compliments on your well-earned efforts my friend, Aloha!
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Date: 9/25/2021 10:49:00 AM
Very creative metaphoric writing Kai. Congratulations for your win.
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Date: 9/25/2021 6:58:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 9/25/2021 5:40:00 AM
Great Writing! Congratulations!
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Date: 8/27/2021 5:35:00 AM
Thanks David. I actually had a very good night's sleep. May be this is my normal world? Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 8/26/2021 1:00:00 PM
Sounds like you had a night of surreal racing thoughts Kai, but got nowhere fast disturbing indeed these Kafka-esque dreams, you portray the horror so eloquently, cheers David
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