Another Dead End

diversion

the avenue closed

not even a toll

grants further passage


a travelling circus

waits at the roundabout 

all exits closed 

until further notice


traffic lights on red alert

department of transport

in administered logic

regulates apathy


trees alongside

hang on for dear life

construction workers

excavate fearful roots


no U turn allowed

fixed penalty fee

points on my license

for not moving on


a perilous overpass 

meets the illusion of

tunnel vision

on borrowed time


my mind inches forward

stagnant collision course

slowly I shake off the duvet

tomorrow will be another escape


26th August 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 11:56 AM
Intriguing conception, Kai, engaging from the onset with every line that opportunes a venturing thought. My compliments on your well-earned efforts my friend, Aloha!
Kauffman Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 10:49 AM
Very creative metaphoric writing Kai. Congratulations for your win.
Agustin Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 6:58 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Alex Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 5:40 AM
Great Writing! Congratulations!
Neumann Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 5:35 AM
Thanks David. I actually had a very good night's sleep. May be this is my normal world? Kind wishes, Kai
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 26, 2021 at 1:00 PM
Sounds like you had a night of surreal racing thoughts Kai, but got nowhere fast disturbing indeed these Kafka-esque dreams, you portray the horror so eloquently, cheers David
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