Nathan Karczewski Poet Free verse

Another Day Without You

A Drastic Turbine filled of emotion
A Overturned Bottle About To Spill
This Reckoning. This Fate.
     Was Meant To Fill
A Soul;A Million from inside & out.
But it's inside me, so I scream, and I shout.
A Vortex of maddness Fills my Mind.
I feel bludgeoned from the inside.
No place for my mind to reside.
Shall I find that place.
That place that shall bring me to grace.
I face, you face, mechanical errors.
Technical difficulties day, to day, to day.
It's not okay.
We should live in a perfect world.
Like when we were young, and innocent.
Not a worry, nor care in the world of wrong.
This Vortex inside me it twists and twirls
It's filling up with mixed emotions.
The desperation sets in.
The mind cannot stop.
It's like turning a broken wrist watch.
It keeps turning.
THE MIND KEEPS burning.
I'm YEARNING FOR YOUr touch.
For your love, AND your care.
DO NOT DARE, EVER TAKE that from me again.
My friend.
You are MY LOVE, You are my life.
Flaunt me. Tell everyone That ONE DAY
ONE DAY  YOU Will Be My WIFE.
Our strife is strong.
Our love is long.
A bond so thick.
Stronger than the strongest brick.
Nothing can break it.
But can I make it?
Through?
Another day.... Without you.

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Poet Destroyer A July 23, 2014 at 5:14 PM Nathan :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~

Nathan Karczewski July 18, 2014 at 6:13 AM Anyone notice the hidden message? THE MIND KEEPS YEARNING FOR YOU AND DO NOT DARE, EVER TAKE MY LOVE ONE DAY...ONE DAY, YOU WILL BE MY WIFE.

Robert Lindley July 17, 2014 at 8:45 AM Congrats on your win!!! Nathan Karczewski July 18, 2014 at 6:13 AM Thank you =)

Saba Khan July 17, 2014 at 6:51 AM Great win..Congrats :) Nathan Karczewski July 18, 2014 at 6:13 AM Well thank you!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 17, 2014 at 12:32 AM Extremely emotional n heartfelt Nathan! Congrats on big win! Nathan Karczewski July 18, 2014 at 6:14 AM I tried my hardest =) Thanks for the support.

Arlene Smith July 16, 2014 at 8:43 PM Congrats on a great win with this heartfelt write, Nathan.. Hugs.. Arlene Nathan Karczewski July 18, 2014 at 6:14 AM Thank you for your support!

Tim Smith July 16, 2014 at 6:03 PM This is wonderful Nathan, Congrats on your win Nathan Karczewski July 18, 2014 at 6:14 AM Thank you Tim, it really does mean a lot.

Poet Destroyer A July 16, 2014 at 5:51 PM I love the poem Nathan, Congratulations! Thank you for enjoying my contest, stop by my latest blog "Tanka you, but no tanka you :)" If you'd like, or have time! No Matter, enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Nathan Karczewski July 18, 2014 at 6:15 AM Once again, thank you for having these contests that I can express myself for. Almost a guideline to releasing what I have to write. I thank you for the support and I shall give you mine back. Once again I thank you.

Nathan Karczewski June 30, 2014 at 3:18 AM These are the feelings that swell inside my stomach when I'm away from my love.