David Crandall Poet Rhyme

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3/3/2026 for Let's Minichu On Feelings Poetry Contest sponsored by Mohan Chutani 

Another Day Will Dawn

“Another day will dawn.”
This, I must remember now, when there’s no more fun.
Hope is gone.

Will I ever
I feel the happy, shining sun?
Never!

Today!
It has begun!
Yay!

Another day will dawn.
I feel the happy, shining sun.
Yay!

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Andrea Dietrich March 19, 2026 at 9:12 AM Yours actually looks good. Big congrats in the contest David Crandall March 20, 2026 at 2:05 PM Thanks, Andrea!

Mohan Chutani March 19, 2026 at 7:54 AM David, thanks for participating in my contest. The feelings of hope is so uplifting. Congratulations for your placement. Best. Mohan. David Crandall March 19, 2026 at 8:28 AM Thanks, Mohan - I appreciate it and enjoyed your contest!

Gershon Wolf March 3, 2026 at 8:36 PM Never knew 'never' to pass so quickly! Keep smiling, David. ~ gw David Crandall March 4, 2026 at 12:19 PM haha, yup, that was a pretty quick plot twist.