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Another Day

A torch carried on forever, indeed, for the aggressive rhymer in me, is alive again, unshackled and freed, rising to challenge another day, I see. As I found myself lost deep in Tolkien, with epic Star Wars, never ending, surrounded in a geek paradise, serene, optical illusions before me, suspending. Life's songs on guitar strings strummed, an epiphany unlike they've ever heard, euphoric dreams in my visions hummed, as I pen archaic word after archaic word. Artistry is born only to be my brother, encircled this star, a pentagram made, my day is done, I have conquered another, as the sun slowly brings down the shade. A Word Collage For Chan Hurst (Cyndi MacMillan's contest)

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Date: 12/20/2014 7:24:00 PM
lovely tribute poem kelly I have so enjoyed learning more about chan from these poems:-) Hugs jan xx
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/24/2014 2:20:00 AM
Chan was a dear friend to many of us and his presence is going to be missed. But, he still lingers on in the poems he left behind... I really appreciate your kind words. Thank you so much, Jan!
Date: 12/13/2014 7:26:00 PM
Thought provoking verse with a splendid ending. Happy Holy Days. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/19/2014 2:24:00 PM
I do appreciate your kind congrats and comments, Debbie. Thank you so much! Happy Holy Days to you!
Date: 12/12/2014 10:52:00 AM
Like most of your work,this zeal you show here confirms you master of letter and I wish to congratulate you on the win...huggs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/17/2014 10:34:00 PM
Your kind words mean so much to me, Kayode. Thank you! I was inspired by the zeal of Chan Hurst for this poem. He always encouraged this kind of artistic writing and aggressive rhyming... Hugs :)
Date: 12/11/2014 8:41:00 AM
Great write and win Kelly...Congrats
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/16/2014 1:39:00 AM
Thank you very much, Joseph.
Date: 12/11/2014 8:12:00 AM
I am pleased to see your tribute recieve top honor, Chan must be smiling down on you, you are a good friend.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/16/2014 1:28:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, as always. Chan's smile will never fade, as he is always in our hearts... It was an honor to honor him with this tribute.
Date: 12/8/2014 9:39:00 PM
A truly great write. Artistic from start to finish...
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/15/2014 1:25:00 AM
Thank you very much, my friend. I haven't written something as artistic as this in quite awhile, and that is how I love to write. So it was nice getting back into my comfort zone!
Date: 12/5/2014 9:45:00 AM
You are so very special Kelly. I am so sorry for your lost. You were loved. He was loved. You made me cry. It was exactly what I needed to let my heart release. You are a wonderful poet. I wish you all the best always. Of course I have to fav this. Lots Of Love, Maurice
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/12/2014 1:41:00 AM
It truly means so much to me when another poet favs my work, especially when it is a poem that is close to my heart... Thank you for your kind and heartfelt words. I was touched by them, Maurice... Lots of love to you :)
Date: 11/28/2014 8:37:00 AM
a golden beautiful pen kelly truly excellent tribute bless you dear friend
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/30/2014 1:44:00 PM
I always appreciate your kind words, my dear friend. Thank you, Liam!
Date: 11/24/2014 2:11:00 PM
beautiful Kelly a real tribute hugs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/29/2014 1:35:00 AM
I appreciate your nice comments, Shadow. Thank you very much! Hugs :)
Date: 11/23/2014 6:48:00 AM
A wonderful poem for Chan. Great write, you've wrapped your words around the Chan that I knew. Best of luck in the comp.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/26/2014 12:45:00 AM
Thank you, Scott. We only knew Chan for a short time, but his big heart and vibrant personality will never be forgotten.
Date: 11/20/2014 9:39:00 AM
chan shines with us, Kelly... your shining dedication him makes my own piece for our friend seem below par... how touching!.. huggs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/24/2014 5:51:00 PM
Yes, I think his presence will always be nearby us, Nette... Thank you for your kind words. What matters most in a dedication is showing that you care. That is much more important that how we write it... Hugs :)
Date: 11/18/2014 7:57:00 AM
Chan would be pleased!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/23/2014 1:05:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Richard. I know that Chan would be pleased with the rhyme for sure!... I tried to write this from his perspective, and imagined what a perfect day would be for him.
Date: 11/18/2014 12:50:00 AM
Kelly, it is so clear that someone who knew him well had to compose this poem. it's beautiful. and top of my list for the ones being written about Chan!!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/23/2014 12:44:00 AM
Thank you so much for your heartfelt and kind comments. They mean a lot to me, Andrea.... It was an honor to have known Chan during the past year. He was a good friend and I'm sure going to miss him. I will always remember his encouraging words, and use that advice from now on when I write a poem.
Date: 11/17/2014 5:33:00 PM
This is beautiful and artistic, Kelly. Lovely to see your pen flowing unshackled, and your rhyming is as catchy as ever. Very expressive write where I am moved by the final two lines, especially. Hugs // paul
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/21/2014 1:01:00 AM
Thank you so much, Paul. Those final two lines are my favorite lines in the poem.... I truly appreciate your great comments, as always, my friend! Hugs :)
Date: 11/17/2014 4:49:00 PM
Kelly, hope this does well on the contest. The first stanza drew me in and I enjoyed the rest of the poem from there.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/21/2014 12:51:00 AM
Thank you for the kind comments, David. I'm so glad you've enjoyed this poem!
Date: 11/17/2014 10:08:00 AM
Kelly dear I want to read your poems on Titanic . Please tell me the names. Thanx. Write on...Love XXXX RAJAT
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Date: 11/16/2014 11:02:00 PM
This one encourages me "I have conquered another" the crescendo. Very powerful poem. Always great.God bless Kelly. Love XXXX RAJAT
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/19/2014 11:56:00 PM
Thank you very much, Rajat. I am equally encouraged by both of your kind comments here!

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