Another Cloudy Dark Winter Day

sun rays of
personal sunshine
sunny person of the sublime
store you away like personal wine
so fine
so damn divine
shower me with sunny rhymes
all the time
line after clever shinning line
is having a sunny personality a crime

personal sunshine
sunny person walking besides the sublime
sunlight made into sweet
tasting divine wine
bright sunny sensations
that tingle the spine
redefining your perception inside your mind
line after clever line 
well crafted design of the rhyme
bright sunlight personal sunshine
pure sunny positivity
was this person's one and only true crime
shinning like the radiance of the sublime
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nance Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 6:24 AM
:-) sunny days sweeping the clouds away! You are good my friend. This made me smile :)
Baez Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 6:26 AM
It's a pleasure to put a smile on your face!
Chircop Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 4:24 PM
Hope the positive sunshine showers you always with a friendship smile Seb.So lovely this is.Glad to be back from holiday and read again my souper friends.
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