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Another Callous God

I Until that dreadful, heart-thumping moment I had been completely unaware That a beautiful perfection Such as yours could so singularly exist... Being in ever greater amounts of Unparalleled loveliness! And how, someday, I should learn something Of wishful atonement; Recalling again the quickly-flung stare Suggestive of a bewildering affection:- Your rude, opened mouth forcefully kissed, The horrid pause, then...the slow unhitching Of your chiffon dress.

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Date: 7/3/2018 12:47:00 PM
Thank you, Brenda...you know of course just how much I appreciate you taking the time. You are held in the highest esteem by me! :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/22/2019 12:29:00 PM
That is so good my dear kind sir!;) let's keep me that way!;) ehh kind sir!;) love it and you know it!;)
Date: 4/21/2018 11:44:00 AM
and then what??? I was waiting to read more after the dress... You took me to your fantasy and then left me by myself ALONE!! A true artist...
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John Fleming
Date: 4/29/2018 2:12:00 PM
Hello, Pashang. Please allow me to say that I have always enjoyed your wonderful comments - you are most kind! My very best regards, Pashang. :) john
Date: 4/11/2018 2:44:00 PM
John, your poem reminds me of a passionate kiss in an elevator my husband (my fiancee at the time) gave me in the middle of an argument. I think I saw stars! I felt every emotion in this splendid piece! I loved this! I always enjoy your poetry. Sorry I haven't been around in so long. Hugs, Connie xxoo
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John Fleming
Date: 4/29/2018 2:02:00 PM
Hi, Connie. Sorry for taking so long to reply...I have been very down of late; you know of course how very much I have always enjoyed and appreciated your kind comments. My warmest regards and very best wishes, Connie. Your good friend. :) john
Date: 4/3/2018 10:28:00 PM
Oooh saucy! Enjoyed :)
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John Fleming
Date: 4/29/2018 1:58:00 PM
Thank you, Maureen! Nice to see you dropping by. My warmest regards! :) john

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