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Another Blue Sky

~A distant island still undiscovered, nearing magnetically to its mystery, distancing me from myself every moment, remembering to forget the return path, even my earth is puzzled,...revolve or rotate? another blue sky beyond this one is calling.~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~000~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/17/2012 8:13:00 AM
Who is Andrea, Kash? A very mind provoking writing, I think happiness is always calling no matter what, is it? :p
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Date: 4/10/2012 1:58:00 PM
"remembering to forget", "even my earth is puzzled" Great lines, Kash. I enjoyed reading your poem. Congrats on your HM in Brian's contest. Love, Kim
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Date: 4/10/2012 7:28:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your well deserved placement in Brian's "Ten Lines" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/9/2012 6:40:00 AM
rawwhr, kashi bud.. congrats on your fine win though it should have been rated higher.. how art thou?: ) huggs!
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Date: 4/8/2012 1:12:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Kash! I agree with Andrea. Yours should have been higher. Glad to see you back. I hope you were on a tropical getaway or some other fabulous vacation. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 4/7/2012 9:18:00 PM
Congrats, Kash, on this "special" poem. wish it had gotten better than HM. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 4/7/2012 4:53:00 PM
Wonderful write,Kash.Congratulations on your win..
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Date: 4/7/2012 1:20:00 PM
OUT OF THE WORRLD!!!!!!!!!! SUPERB!!!AGR8 ONE KASH...........~sashi
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Date: 4/7/2012 7:06:00 AM
But of course this was on the winners' list...laced with strong vocab and the layers of fantasy...Oh, happy day!! :) Gwendolen
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Date: 4/3/2012 11:16:00 AM
yoohooo.. where are you, kashi buddy??... arrgh!..:) huggs!
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Date: 4/1/2012 7:48:00 PM
The images are hypnotizing and have just for a moment taken me away.......so nice, Kash! Really enjoyed it!
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Date: 3/31/2012 1:37:00 PM
so gracefully rendered, kash... love this all the way.. where you??... miss ya and huggs! :)
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Date: 3/31/2012 11:06:00 AM
Kash I like this, though I hope the magnetic pull is not so strong as it takes you away, hope you are entering my latest contest, I have a feeling you can come up with some great Palindromes...have a good weekend my friend..David
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Date: 3/30/2012 9:53:00 PM
Love the poem, Kash. The last line is perfect. Wherever you are going, I hope you're not leaving for long. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/30/2012 8:19:00 PM
Love it, Kash. It seems vaguely familiar. Probably because you enjoy the theme of "blue sky" in your poetry. So where did you leave for???
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Date: 3/30/2012 7:25:00 PM
leaving~~~~~~~~~~
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