Kash Poet Poet Acrostic

Another Blue Sky

~A distant island still undiscovered,
nearing magnetically to its mystery,
distancing me from myself every moment,
remembering to forget the return path,
even my earth is puzzled,...revolve or rotate?
another blue sky beyond this one is calling.~





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Dinda Minardi April 17, 2012 at 8:13 AM Who is Andrea, Kash? A very mind provoking writing, I think happiness is always calling no matter what, is it? :p

Kim Merryman April 10, 2012 at 1:58 PM "remembering to forget", "even my earth is puzzled" Great lines, Kash. I enjoyed reading your poem. Congrats on your HM in Brian's contest. Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown April 10, 2012 at 7:28 AM A belated congratulations on your well deserved placement in Brian's "Ten Lines" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud April 9, 2012 at 6:40 AM rawwhr, kashi bud.. congrats on your fine win though it should have been rated higher.. how art thou?: ) huggs!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders April 8, 2012 at 1:12 AM Congrats on your win, Kash! I agree with Andrea. Yours should have been higher. Glad to see you back. I hope you were on a tropical getaway or some other fabulous vacation. Blessings, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich April 7, 2012 at 9:18 PM Congrats, Kash, on this "special" poem. wish it had gotten better than HM. LUv, Andrea

Olusegun Arowolo April 7, 2012 at 4:53 PM Wonderful write,Kash.Congratulations on your win..

Sashi Prabhu April 7, 2012 at 1:20 PM OUT OF THE WORRLD!!!!!!!!!! SUPERB!!!AGR8 ONE KASH...........~sashi

Gwendolen Song April 7, 2012 at 7:06 AM But of course this was on the winners' list...laced with strong vocab and the layers of fantasy...Oh, happy day!! :) Gwendolen

Nette Onclaud April 3, 2012 at 11:16 AM yoohooo.. where are you, kashi buddy??... arrgh!..:) huggs!

Gwendolen Song April 1, 2012 at 7:48 PM The images are hypnotizing and have just for a moment taken me away.......so nice, Kash! Really enjoyed it!

Nette Onclaud March 31, 2012 at 1:37 PM so gracefully rendered, kash... love this all the way.. where you??... miss ya and huggs! :)

David Williams March 31, 2012 at 11:06 AM Kash I like this, though I hope the magnetic pull is not so strong as it takes you away, hope you are entering my latest contest, I have a feeling you can come up with some great Palindromes...have a good weekend my friend..David

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 30, 2012 at 9:53 PM Love the poem, Kash. The last line is perfect. Wherever you are going, I hope you're not leaving for long. Blessings, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich March 30, 2012 at 8:19 PM Love it, Kash. It seems vaguely familiar. Probably because you enjoy the theme of "blue sky" in your poetry. So where did you leave for???

Kash Poet March 30, 2012 at 7:25 PM leaving~~~~~~~~~~