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Anorexia

she shuns me from embracing her these days her brittle fragile body no longer compliant thin skin lifeless and sagging begging for help knowing she needs support but still so defiant bones pressing a blanket of desperation bringing her spirit down more every day trying so hard to be small and invisible how in the world did she get this way is there hope or purpose to keep on trying does anyone listen and know there is pain the problem so hidden we cannot find it faith has been taken.. emptiness remains

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/16/2014 8:45:00 PM
I have faced similar struggles with ED so this poem really touched and inspired me. Thank you for sharing!
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Date: 5/12/2014 3:14:00 PM
This is such a sad and emotional poem. To think that someone you love will not allow you to help them, or even hold them anymore, is just heartbreaking. Congratulations on your win, Betty!.... Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem.
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Date: 5/11/2014 9:41:00 PM
Betty, congratulations on winning in PD contest. Verlena
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Date: 5/11/2014 6:52:00 PM
congratulations on your win. This is a sad story too often happening. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/11/2014 3:43:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine win, Betty.
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Date: 5/11/2014 2:14:00 PM
Strong and heartfelt; a condition that we are conscious of but not always capable of relating to; so sad. // congrats on your merited win. // paul
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Date: 5/11/2014 5:59:00 AM
Beautiful expression of sad moments wid powerful words! Congrats on merited top win Betty !
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Date: 5/11/2014 5:13:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win for interesting write, Betty
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Date: 5/11/2014 2:01:00 AM
Betty. Thank you for everything, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Have yourself a wonderful night, and a beautiful mother's days.... xox~ Linda
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Date: 4/29/2014 8:48:00 PM
Betty, you have such a gift for seeing into circumstances and conditions and expressing them for others. Thank you.
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Date: 4/29/2014 2:41:00 PM
Such a terrible condition so sensitively described. Hugs Jan xx
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