Anonymous Angels

I heard outside on Christmas Eve
loud taps that brought me to my door.
They had so little time to leave!
And what was on our front porch floor?

I looked around at all the snow,
but there was not a soul in sight.
How swiftly they had had to go
to disappear into the night.

I reached down for a box I saw.
atop it was an envelop.
The box so big inspired my awe
and in me leapt a spark of hope.

My spouse was jobless, and that year
had been quite hard. Had someone known
of our bad luck and growing fear?
For in their gifts great love was shown.

They’d brought us money, that would pay
our bills that month and food to feed
our kids great meals on Christmas day.
God bless them for their gracious deed.


April 26, 2018 for the contest of Yazmin Malik
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 6:23 AM
A lovely holiday poem of hope and timely generosity. Well penned, Andrea.
Johnson Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 10:23 PM
Well Andrea, I don't know if this is a true story. But I was a mess after those last two stanza's. Merry Christmas all year long.
K. Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 10:34 AM
Hi sweetie. Me being a mushroom here... this is a really sweet poem about angels on earth, I really do believe they can exist in our midst. God bless them indeed! How are you? I hope all is well with you. We need to catch up soon! giving you hugs right now!
Babcock Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 12:05 PM
A beautiful warming gesture in an act of kindness by a loving angel. Awesome one. love phyl
Gentry Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 4:14 PM
What beautiful angel(s) you portray! An excellent write. Should do great in contest.
One Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 3:39 PM
What a beautiful gesture, these are always the best ones.. Great poem for the contest Andrea...
Pandit Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 2:27 PM
Excellent poem Andrea..enjoyed reading this story of pure love and grace!
Smith Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 2:09 PM
Your own Tiny Tim story, well done...
Michael Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 12:16 PM
God bless them indeed...A poem of gratitude... powerful...
Devonshire Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 12:03 PM
Sometimes we spend ages shopping when the most-needed gift is money. A blessing, indeed, from an anonymous benefactor who brought joy to your holidays, Andrea. Well done, and best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
Mhangwa Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 11:59 AM
Beautiful poem Andrea. All the best with the contest
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 10:50 AM
What a wonderful gift - there are some real angels out there:-) hugs jan xxx
Melugin Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 10:01 AM
My dear Andrea...Being first to comment is an honor! Your poetic message is a challenge for us, to become Anonymous Angels!
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