Anomie

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Written: April 10, 2024 For Edward Ebeh Contest “Raise your words, not voice. It is rain that grows flowers, not thunder.” — Rumi
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In society grasp, individuals fade, As group dynamics falter, satiation wane. Anomie is the state in which we reside, Void of meaning, where shell may subside. Man dwells in the domain of existence, Longing for purpose—a tale to share once. He pursues punter goals, a noble quest, To descry his sanctuary, where he can rest. Sans clear vision—a peculiar goal to pursue, He wanders, devoid of any discernible clue. A protocol to follow—a structure to defray, He seeks a clear path to lead the way. It is in the heights—that he finds his worth, A divine connection, a sense of rebirth. In a world of mayhem, where chaos reigns, A sense of chaos and rebellion in our veins. We're in an era of disorder and hopelessness, Where a sense of alienation thrives with idleness. Streets brimming with an air of dread and fear, As the supremacy of law is starting to disappear. A land ruled by untamed and careless, Peace and order are baffling awareness. Durkheim unveils a modern, cosmic community, Where people or teams cease to have impunity, Stuck in a condition of "anomie," they dwell, Devoid of crucial social interactions, they tell. An individual, adrift, follows a restless tide, Planless self-empowerment with no guide. An aimless existence, devoid of worth, As delight lies in future, not in present berth. One ought to consider their inevitable fate. The insignificance and loneliness state. He would undoubtedly elapse insane. Or spirit might seek the numbing arcane. Crisis and violence, madness untamed, Revolution's fire, the world inflamed. In sync with events of insignificance. Unleashed automobility, a hedonistic dance, Individualism allure, a tempting chance, Grip of anomie and despair erodes at a glance. Conspicuous consumption, a fleeting thrill, Yet unsustainable, bear beyond, still. In a sphere bereft of spirit light, Where meaning fades—hope takes flight. An oddity exists in trans-political time frame, There is no repercussion for deviance claim.

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Date: 4/25/2024 5:01:00 AM
"We're in an era of disorder and hopelessness, Where a sense of alienation thrives with idleness." True observation. A very powerful poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/23/2024 9:00:00 PM
A powerful write, SP, on the spiritual quest too, we become disenchanted with the e tern also mundane and go in, within. You’ve brought out the feeling of loneliness and helplessness, estrangement from society, very vividly. Masterfully penned. Love the Rumi quote too. Warmest congratulations on your inevitable top win!
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Date: 4/23/2024 1:37:00 PM
Outstanding work, as usual, Lasaad. A thought-provoking meditation on existential struggle. This is a stunner. Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Date: 4/12/2024 1:29:00 AM
Superb poem on a subject not easy to define. Normally suicides come from disappointments but here we are on another level. Best for a win.
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Date: 4/11/2024 3:24:00 PM
SP, searching for meaning takes a lot of thought and an ethical standing that comes from growing up well or learning on the fly (assuming the basics are there). We live in some very difficult times with regards to ethical structure. Glad you wrote about the struggle.
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Date: 4/11/2024 11:49:00 AM
Dear Sotto, I loved how you explored the erosion of individuality amidst the chaos of collective existence. The themes of anomie and disconnection are reflecting a stark commentary on the existential struggles of our time. Yes, there is a sense of aimlessness and longing for purpose that pervades the human experience, offering a compelling portrayal of the quest for meaning in an increasingly disordered world. Very thought-provoking insights, Sotto. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 4/11/2024 9:56:00 AM
I love how your poem delves into the complexities of societal dynamics and the existential struggle of individuals within it. In this thought-provoking poem, the theme of anomie, a state of normlessness and disillusionment, serves as a lens through which the speaker explores the disintegration of social cohesion and the resulting existential void faced by individuals.
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Date: 4/11/2024 12:36:00 AM
What a profound and meaningful poem this is dr sotto! I absolutely love what youv conveyed here in such eloquence as always, so much truth youv delivered with rhymes using poetic techniques such as metaphors etc that really makes your write worthy of all the accolades, i love the quote too and i agree with it, and goes very well with your poem too. I especially loved “ In sync with events of insignificance. Unleashed automobility, a hedonistic dance,” powerful! “ An oddity exists in trans-political time frame, There is no repercussion for deviance claim.” Impeccable! Very wise and excellent poem this is! Pleasure reading this! Best wishes
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Date: 4/10/2024 2:48:00 PM
I felt the truth of this poem. Depression can lead to inaction. Life has struggles. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 4/10/2024 2:30:00 PM
A powerful quote, my friend, introducing your meaningful poem. Aptly done to enhance the theme. These lines spell the essence for me: ------We're in an era of disorder and hopelessness, Where a sense of alienation thrives with idleness. Streets brimming with an air of dread and fear---Well written, as always, Lasaad.
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Date: 4/10/2024 12:10:00 PM
- The world is chaotic ... is there a system in this chaos ... standing strong in an overwhelming and chaotic time is difficult to raise your words ... not your voice ... excellent writing, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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