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Annoying Walk

Annoying Walk Annoying things are loose socks sinking slowly in your shoes feeling a small stone under your toes people with jaundiced views The obvious absence of reason despite copper fastened truths Pleasant wee people that smile inanely, that irritating vitality of youth Fractured graphite in pencils pens that leak unchecked Frozen butter on a winters morn people who say “context” Parties and weddings feasts, speeches and flat caps Dressing for special occasions all that other crap People say I'm miserable, say I should lighten up Look to some imaginary bright side the other meaningless stuff Can't they understand pessimism is not simply a negative view It's a window into the real world, and secrets revealed to a few

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Date: 1/6/2016 10:44:00 AM
I thought at first this was going to be a piece about John Cleese but this is so much more... '...frozen butter on a winter's morn,' gotta hate that. This is the best piece on pessimism I have ever read. BRAVO my friend. Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/25/2015 4:37:00 PM
abut your poem: wow, that's a deep look and I understand the reason why you feel this way. LINAD
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Date: 12/25/2015 4:36:00 PM
Declan I want to Wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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