Annoying Walk

Annoying Walk

Annoying things are loose socks
sinking slowly in your shoes
feeling a small stone under your toes
people with jaundiced views
The obvious absence of reason
despite copper fastened truths
Pleasant wee people that smile inanely,
that irritating vitality of youth

Fractured graphite in pencils
pens that leak unchecked
Frozen butter on a winters morn
people who say “context”
Parties and weddings feasts,
speeches and flat caps
Dressing for special occasions
all that other crap

People say I'm miserable,
say I should lighten up
Look to some imaginary bright side
the other meaningless stuff
Can't they understand pessimism
is not simply a negative view
It's a window into the real world,
and secrets revealed to a few
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 6, 2016 at 10:44 AM
I thought at first this was going to be a piece about John Cleese but this is so much more... '...frozen butter on a winter's morn,' gotta hate that. This is the best piece on pessimism I have ever read. BRAVO my friend. Best wishes, Keith
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December 25, 2015 at 4:37 PM
abut your poem: wow, that's a deep look and I understand the reason why you feel this way. LINAD
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December 25, 2015 at 4:36 PM
Declan I want to Wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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