Annoying Dentist

I have a pain in my tooth.
But the dentist is somewhat aloof.
“The clinic is dirty,
don’t come ‘til two thirty”.
It already is, that’s the truth!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Portrey Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 5:30 AM
Hi Jan , yeah I’m fine Thanks for asking. Just been busy doing other things. Will do some more poems soon Hope you are ok xxx
Allison Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 4:25 AM
sarah are you ok, not see you around for a while and you don't have the soup mail feature activated:-( hugs jan xx
Rose  Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 6:25 AM
I think you might need a new dentist, lol, nicely done xo
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 2:28 AM
good one Sarah I have written limericks on a similar theme:-) hugs Jan xx
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