Annoyance

an annoying fly insists on sharing my lunch two attempts...and splat! written August 13, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/15/2021 3:43:00 AM

I drowned a wasp who was not killed by a generous douse of wasp spray yesterday, so this resonated with me today.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/15/2021 10:08:00 AM

When they get annoying, they simply have to go. I love "splat!"

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/14/2021 10:56:00 AM

Annoying is the word Milton, you'd think they'd heed the warning after one swat but they're suicidal and come back for more grrrrr. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/14/2021 11:10:00 AM

Many a fly has given up a decent gig by becoming annoying! At least a mosquito moves on after getting his fill, but not a fly!

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/14/2021 7:55:00 AM

Great haiku with a witty backbone, sometimes individuals seem haughty, but maybe he's only hungry.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/14/2021 8:40:00 AM

Possibly, but I tolerate only so much annoyance...by a fly!

Jenna Logan

Date: 8/14/2021 6:34:00 AM

ha ha ha

L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/14/2021 8:41:00 AM

Glad you got a chuckle out of this one, Jenna.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/14/2021 6:34:00 AM

Ouch... poor old fly! LOL... God bless you, Love, Gina

L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/14/2021 8:41:00 AM

Thanks, Regina. He's over it by now!