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forty years ago we vowed to love each other until death parts us the fragrance of carnations lingers in my memory 5/28/21 For M.L. Kiser's Tanka contest

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Date: 6/14/2021 12:09:00 PM
Beautiful memories! Cherish them!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/14/2021 2:01:00 PM
Thank you, Smita!
Date: 6/7/2021 5:06:00 AM
Sad one but it had its joys as well. Congrats on this winner. Sara
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/9/2021 10:51:00 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 6/5/2021 2:43:00 PM
Congratulations Kim on your winning poem with that surprising last line of carnations fragrance lingering on. Beautiful!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/9/2021 10:51:00 AM
Thank you, Frances!
Date: 6/4/2021 5:23:00 PM
this is utter poignancy. Love it, Kim. Congrats in the contest.gotta fave this one too!!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/4/2021 6:45:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! So glad you liked it.
Date: 6/4/2021 9:08:00 AM
A lovely tanka, Kim, I see this has won, my congratulations, both on your win and on a long-lasting love-filled marriage:)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/4/2021 6:45:00 PM
Thank you, Jo!
Date: 6/3/2021 7:30:00 PM
Kim, How nice those decades spent with one of nature's finest craft. The sparkles will always be remembered in a Tanka's true loving ways. -Richard
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/4/2021 6:44:00 PM
Thank you, Richard!
Date: 6/3/2021 3:32:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your win .God bless you. <3
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/4/2021 6:44:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 6/3/2021 3:29:00 PM
Wow, Kim, this is a beautiful tanka. Congratulations on your fine win. Carol Louise
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/4/2021 6:44:00 PM
Thank you, Carol!
Date: 6/3/2021 10:08:00 AM
You have your very originality. Congratulations!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/4/2021 6:43:00 PM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Date: 6/3/2021 9:49:00 AM
Kim, your tanka leaves a lovely fragrance of creativity. In five lines you have taken us through forty years with the scent of carnations as your vehicle! So well done. Congratulations and blessings to you my friend.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/4/2021 6:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sam!
Date: 6/3/2021 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write with great memories. Each anniversary is a blessing/gift. Have a blessed day...............
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/4/2021 6:42:00 PM
Thank you, Paula! Each year is a gift.
Date: 6/2/2021 6:45:00 AM
A lovely piece Kim, beautifully penned truly. have a blessed day, it's a lovely sunny day over here! Gordon
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/4/2021 6:41:00 PM
Thank you, Gordon!
Date: 6/1/2021 5:04:00 PM
Oh, this is special Kim. Very nice. Congratulations :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/4/2021 6:41:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 6/1/2021 5:25:00 AM
A fine tanka Kim to celebrate your lasting marriage, it’s funny the only scent I remember from mine was cordite, coming from the in-law side, lol, very best of luck in the contest, cheers David
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/1/2021 7:57:00 AM
Thank you, David!
Date: 6/1/2021 5:06:00 AM
A Tanka worthy of a splendid 40th anniversary, my dearest friend, Kim! May God bless both of you with love, health, and happiness for another 40 years. Congratulations!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/1/2021 7:56:00 AM
You are so sweet, Demetrios! Thank you!
Date: 5/30/2021 8:15:00 PM
Aw, very sweet, Kim. Happy Anniversary, and many, many more, all in good health. Best wishes, Gershon
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/1/2021 7:56:00 AM
Thank you, so much, Gershon!
Date: 5/30/2021 4:34:00 PM
A belated Happy Anniversary. A sweet poem Kim. love phyl
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/1/2021 7:54:00 AM
Thank you, Phyl! Actually my anniversary is the 30th so you are right on time!.
Date: 5/30/2021 9:49:00 AM
Nice, love this one.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/1/2021 7:53:00 AM
Thank you, Jehiel!
Date: 5/29/2021 8:54:00 PM
So sweet! This poem will linger in my memory too! Lovely!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/1/2021 7:53:00 AM
Thank you, JCB!
Date: 5/29/2021 12:09:00 PM
this is lovely, kim! best of luck in the contest...
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/1/2021 7:53:00 AM
Thank you, Ilene!
Date: 5/29/2021 6:17:00 AM
Happy anniversary. Enjoy
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/1/2021 7:53:00 AM
Thank you, Rama!
Date: 5/29/2021 3:26:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this. The Lord be praised for triumphant anniversary celebrations in your life. God bless you.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/1/2021 7:52:00 AM
Thank you, Beata!
Date: 5/29/2021 2:17:00 AM
Happy anniversary Kim, enjoy the celebrations. Tom
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/1/2021 7:52:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 5/28/2021 11:12:00 PM
We Have so many anniversaries: birth marriage, death. I usually concentrate on the last. Best for a win.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/1/2021 7:51:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 5/28/2021 10:06:00 PM
Great tanka, Kim, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/1/2021 7:51:00 AM
Thank you, Eve!