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Premiere Contest WinnerAnnihilating Time

Along time linear, memories blur
The ones recalled by mind, are those that bind
Mixed emotions stir, of which some endure
As we rewind time, life has left behind

Fleeting is youth prime, headed for deaths chime
Boon now bane, until desires to rest lain
Yet untouched by time, is bliss throb sublime 
Free from ego borne stain, once darkness slain

Time in dalliance with our sentience
Holding its breath, in the void of stillness 
Let then our dance, be in exuberance 
Entwining our soul, with the That oneness

Bliss throbs within spear, as Gods love draws near 
Movement of time itself, then disappears 

24-May-2021

Time poetry contest
Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke
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Agustin Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 8:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you.
Seeker Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 10:01 PM
Thank you dear Beata!
Kauffman Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 1:09 PM
Very lovely with many lines reaching out to be pondered. Congratulations on your win Seeker!
Seeker Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 10:01 PM
Thanks Sam!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 7:41 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Time disappears but God is always near. Have a blessed day....................
Seeker Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 10:01 PM
Thank you, dear Paula
Daniel Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 6:14 AM
Congratulations on your worthy win, US:)
Seeker Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 10:01 PM
Thank you, Jo!
Miller Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 11:22 PM
Congratulations on your win, an excellent write!
Seeker Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 1:25 AM
Thank you, Terry
Balasubramanian Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 8:07 PM
Time exists in the realm of body, when we associate with body. Soul belongs to another realm. Beautiful! Congratulations
Seeker Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 9:30 PM
Touché!
Rose  Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 6:22 PM
Time and God both draw near as we have our living experience dear poet. Congratulations on your 1st place win, dear Seeker :)
Seeker Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 6:41 PM
Thank you, Mystic Rose!
Mcintosh Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 6:04 PM
Congrats Friend. God bless you always. Love, Gina
Seeker Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 6:40 PM
Thank you dear Regina!
Buhagiar Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 1:48 AM
Can we annihilate time? We cannot even control our future though we have choices that could influence our future time.
Seeker Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 1:51 AM
Space-time disappears in Samadhi, dear Victor
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