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Annihilated

Gone Without Awareness Consumed by smoke Flames crackle loudly Glowing blue, and greenish As heights increase full with life Spreading rapidly miles ahead Incinerating those in its path Why don’t natural disasters get punished?

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Beata Agustin

Date: 5/7/2024 9:04:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/12/2016 10:07:00 PM

FELICIA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 5/19/2011 6:20:00 AM

Interesting write. Of course, natural disasters are inanimate...so-called 'acts of god'...unanswerable and unheeding.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/19/2011 4:03:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Felicia. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/18/2011 7:12:00 PM

Nice expressions on annihilation, Felicia with this nice form,

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/18/2011 3:57:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight.. answer to your last line a mystery ... hope u have fun on P.S. as u continue to share with luv.. check out our free contests and good luck luv..