Anne

It was a hot day Anne brought her dog to the beach So both could cool off Both went into the water They did not falter

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Alfred Berggren

Date: 8/2/2017 10:21:00 AM

A day at the beach can be so much fun. I like to ride the surf.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/2/2017 1:39:00 PM

A day at the beach is a lot of fun. Be carful riding the surf. I hope you are a strong swimmer. Have a nice day my friend.

Augustus Black

Date: 7/29/2017 12:30:00 AM

Felt very wonderful to read this one out.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/29/2017 12:15:00 PM

Hello Augustus, I felt the same way when I wrote it. Have anice day my friend.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/23/2017 4:46:00 PM

I don't blame them; it's been rather hot this past week; today seems no better, even with the rain. I know that they enjoyed themselves; well done.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/24/2017 2:11:00 PM

Thank you M.L. I can see Anne and the dog going for a swim. Have a nice day my friend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/23/2017 2:58:00 PM

This is so sweet and fun Darlene. I can just see it! Thanks for sharing :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/24/2017 2:13:00 PM

Your welcome,I can just picture them going into the water. Have a nice day my friend.