Anne

It was a hot day  
       Anne brought her dog to the beach 
        So both could cool off
         Both went into the water
          They did not falter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Berggren Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 10:21 AM
A day at the beach can be so much fun. I like to ride the surf.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 1:39 PM
A day at the beach is a lot of fun. Be carful riding the surf. I hope you are a strong swimmer. Have a nice day my friend.
Black Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 12:30 AM
Felt very wonderful to read this one out.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 12:15 PM
Hello Augustus, I felt the same way when I wrote it. Have anice day my friend.
Kiser Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 4:46 PM
I don't blame them; it's been rather hot this past week; today seems no better, even with the rain. I know that they enjoyed themselves; well done.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 2:11 PM
Thank you M.L. I can see Anne and the dog going for a swim. Have a nice day my friend.
Sands Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 2:58 PM
This is so sweet and fun Darlene. I can just see it! Thanks for sharing :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 2:13 PM
Your welcome,I can just picture them going into the water. Have a nice day my friend.
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